http://relaxmaxontheroad.com/ochitsubaki/

落椿
palabras estacionales

Camelia caída
=primavera

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Escucha el universo

Camelia Caída

En la carretera

Encontré (=relaxmax) la eternidad

¡Encontré el universo en la camelia caída!

Primavera eternidado
Á
La luz de Kurama

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光さす
くらまの山に
おち椿
宇宙を望む
永遠の春

落椿
seasonal words
OCHI TSUBAKI
fallen camellia = spring
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This is my first ever TANKA短歌！
I just thought…

I never thought I would compose TANKA (don’t know why:)!)

so this is MY FIRST ONE!

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Ochi Tsubaki (fallen camellia)
On the road

Listening
in the Universe

Eternal Spring
in
the Light of Kurama

➖
écoute l’univers

camélia tombé
sur la route

J’ai (=relaxmax) trouvé l’éternité

J’ai trouvé l’univers dans le camélia déchu !

Printemps éternel

la Lumière de Kurama

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http://relaxmaxontheroad.com/auntie-relaxmax-ichien-poem/

もうちょっと

直訳ぽく！^_^

The light shines on
fallen Camelia
On the road

Ochitsubaki
In the light of Kurama

I(relaxmax) found eternity in the nature

Eternal spring in Camelia on the road

Listening to the universe
And compose TANKA!